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支招小作文(182) I 静态柱 观看&参与不同运动的男生比例

2024年4月26日

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[2024/ 4/ 20] The bar chart below shows the percentages of males between 16 and 25 years old who watched and participated in six kinds of sports.

 

【主体段分段】

watching > participating一段(蓝色>橙色)

participating >watching一段(橙色>蓝色)

 

【开头段】

The bar chart presents information about the proportions of 16-to-25-year-old men watching and participating in 6 types of sports.  

 

【概述段】

It is clear that more males preferred to engage in basketball, tennis and fishing rather than just watch these sports, while the figures for other 3 sports showed a different patternThe smallest gap between the two groups of people could be found in basketball.

思路要点:

- basketball,tennis,fishing→橙色(participating)>蓝色(watching);其余三种运动数据规律相反

- basketball:两色差距最小

 

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in terms of football, the proportion of male spectators(69%) was more than three times as large as the figure for male participants. A similar gap between these two groups of people could be found in rugby and horse riding and racing, where the figures for male viewers ranked the second(45%) and third place (30%) respectively.

思路要点:football, rugby, horse riding and racing(蓝色>橙色)

- football:蓝色(watching)是橙色(participating)的3倍多

- rugby & horse riding and racing:两色差距相似;蓝色(watching)分别排名第二、第三位

 

【Body 2】

In the other three types of sports, there were more players. This is especially true for fishing, where the percentage of participants was the largest(35%), while merely 2% of the surveyed males preferred watching this activity. Tennis was chosen by roughly 10% of the participants, roughly 5 times the figure for spectators. However, the two types of people shared a similar figure in basketball, with approximately 20%.

思路要点:basketball, tennis, fishing

- 其余三种运动:橙色(participating)>蓝色(watching)

- fishing:两色差距,橙色(participating)→35%,但蓝色(watching)→只有2%

- tennis:橙色(participating)→10%,大约是蓝色(watching)的5倍

- basketball:两色数据相似,大约为20%