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[2024/ 4/ 20] The bar chart below shows the percentages of males between 16 and 25 years old who watched and participated in six kinds of sports.
【主体段分段】:
watching > participating一段(蓝色>橙色)
participating >watching一段(橙色>蓝色)
【开头段】
The bar chart presents information about the proportions of 16-to-25-year-old men watching and participating in 6 types of sports.
【概述段】
It is clear that more males preferred to engage in basketball, tennis and fishing rather than just watch these sports, while the figures for other 3 sports showed a different pattern. The smallest gap between the two groups of people could be found in basketball.
思路要点:
- basketball,tennis,fishing→橙色(participating)>蓝色(watching);其余三种运动数据规律相反
- basketball:两色差距最小
【Body 1】
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in terms of football, the proportion of male spectators(69%) was more than three times as large as the figure for male participants. A similar gap between these two groups of people could be found in rugby and horse riding and racing, where the figures for male viewers ranked the second(45%) and third place (30%) respectively.
思路要点:football, rugby, horse riding and racing(蓝色>橙色)
- football:蓝色(watching)是橙色(participating)的3倍多
- rugby & horse riding and racing:两色差距相似;蓝色(watching)分别排名第二、第三位
【Body 2】
In the other three types of sports, there were more players. This is especially true for fishing, where the percentage of participants was the largest(35%), while merely 2% of the surveyed males preferred watching this activity. Tennis was chosen by roughly 10% of the participants, roughly 5 times the figure for spectators. However, the two types of people shared a similar figure in basketball, with approximately 20%.
思路要点:basketball, tennis, fishing
- 其余三种运动:橙色(participating)>蓝色(watching)
- fishing:两色差距,橙色(participating)→35%,但蓝色(watching)→只有2%
- tennis:橙色(participating)→10%,大约是蓝色(watching)的5倍
- basketball:两色数据相似,大约为20%